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Campfire Talk
by philipp seis
I imagined a guy sitting at a campfire
saying this sentence.
Comments
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Jakub Kupčík
Work on your acting choices, I think it was sort of over-acted and way too cartoony
[user]
I like your animation. good work, but he is overacting. less is sometimes more! :)
Chris Bull
Too many movements to keep up with in general. Between 47-125 these moves could almost be removed and replaced with something much simpler ( or just toned down a lot). The animation is actually quite good for the most part, just some questionable acting choices imo.
Fabian Rosenkranz
Some nice poses, but he's overacting.
Lena Envall
too many poses
Diane Aarts
acting is interesting, not sure it fits the quiet, subtle audio.
Meng-Syuan Sie
The movement looks a little too jerky. For the acting, there are too many poses, maybe you can try to keep it simple, and smooth out the animation.
Niklas Bergwall
too much movement, sometimes less is more
Joshua Hart
I like his swagger
David BESNIER
too much movements.. just 4-5 is enough for this short time
Merlyn Moynagh
he does a little too many big movements for such a subtle dialouge, try to to tone down the jumps in poses a bit. On frame 82 lower his left elbow down a bit, as it weighs a bit. Keep at it!
Kevin Nguyen
too much movements and poping.