11SecondApril

philipp seis

i liked how he's breathing.

Philippe Duvin

nice acting but way too much camera changes !

Aaron Rivera

Nicely done! Characters all move great and the acting is pretty good. I like the story you tell with the expression on the therapist's face and how he reaches for a picture, as though this is advice he could also learn from. The problem with this one is the camera. It moves around way too much. Having cuts for nearly every pause isn't necessary and mostly just damages the mood. I do like the cut for "exactly who you are" but beyond resetting the shot afterwards, the rest are arbitrary. I feel like a camera pan to include the picture in the shot would've been more effective if you still wanted a reveal for the story.

Michael Tan

The "good mood, bad mood" action seems to be a bit too exaggerated.

Waddy Devas Wiggle

keep it up the good work.