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The Wise Bartender
A bartender who is giving advice to his drunk friend!
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philipp seis
bartenders ... :)
Mahesh Waran
great storytelling skills !
Stafford Ahartz
A great entry, but the lip sync is off by a few frames in parts.
Daniel Keeble
Got some nice animation in there but you hid half of it with the bottle at the start!! Move it and let us enjoy what's going on :D Nice work. Keep it up!
Merlyn Moynagh
Wow! I love the second camera shot, where he grabs a bottle from above the frame. Really great choice there! The head feels a bit dead in the first shot, very still, not enough subtle movement. I would like it a bit more if we could still see his head turn a bit from camera 1 to camera 2, to get that continuity a bit more. Frame 247 to 267, the bearded man rests his head on his arm a bit too slowly as his arm gets into 'position' far before the head reaches it. I would play with the head/ neck fingers and wrist a bit more between those frames, as well as add a bit more movement to the still body so it doesn't feel disconnected.
Very ambitious piece! I certainly like the feel