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father-daughter relationship
by Melissa
Description
A father you have some difficulties to give some advise to her dauther.
Comments
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Philippe Duvin
nice acting. Your main character is a bit close to the border of the frame, you could try to restage your shot, it would improve it a lot !
Mahesh Waran
moving hold is good.. but a pause at times gives more texture :)
Greg Stovell
Love the silent character's expressions - as well as the eyes.