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11 seconds April competiton
by Prasanjay
Description
A conversation between an elderly man and a girl.
Comments
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Philippe Duvin
Nice acting. The secondary character moves too much and because of the composition, we are distracting form the main acting by it. Your main acting looks sweet, I would have frame the camera more around him. Nice work
Aaron Rivera
Excellent. The only real issue is that the guy doesn't seem to look at the girl very much. Maybe the pupils need to be repositioned to make her the focus more. Otherwise this is excellent.
April Slocombe
Movements are good if a little floaty but the poses and lip sync are consistent.