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I'm uhh, Divorcing you.
by Caelan
Doing CG work for 4 years, did actualy animation for 1.5 years
5-6 days, (not including multiple attempts)
Uh , Husband is divorcing his wife. It just wasn't working out.
Comments
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Marlowe
Beautiful render but the actions don't feel as though they match up with the duologue
overall, rather well done though :)
Justin Miller
Looks pretty solid. I'd tone down the animation a bit so it's more subtle, and get rid of the camera movements. It's kind of unnecessary.
philipp seis
Very moody ! The hands are creepy. She should divorce the guy. Or no...that's her lawer right ?
Sean McDonald
Shadow cuts his body in two at the neck, might look better to have his face only partially covered by shadow.
Dan Raigorodsky Bendahan
I think the camera shake doesn't help to the story so keep it simple !
Aaron Rivera
Pretty good! The lip sync could use some touching up and the shakeycam was unnecessary but overall it's solid.
Also, that divorce document is HUGE.
Dario
good but the movements of the camera are a bit too random
Mahesh Waran
rather give more time in your animation!
Andrey
Too much camera movement
Brian Heath
good idea...the camera was a little jarring though
Lauren Kimball
I like the set up, but the camera movement is a bit distracting.
Sophie Bracmard
The camera is moving too much. It's really distracting and there is no use for it. I don't think it's a good idea to put the face of your character like that. We can't really see his expression and lipsync. Careful with the gestures. He's doing a lot of different ones in a very few time, it doesn't look very natural.
Esa Faramarzian
your lighting is nice but its hiding what this club is all about, your ANIMATION.