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Baby Come Back to Me
Just a silly, fun first attempt at the 11 Second Club! Critiques are very, very welcome and appreciated. Thank you!
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philipp seis
Superfunny Idea. Filmclassics reloaded !
Yuri Marcel Vieira
hahahaha feel bad for him
hamid
funny :D
April Slocombe
There could be more emphasis on the eyes of the Morpheus rigs and the transition between the main man saying his dialogue and the shocking realisation of the other guy carrying Bonnie is choppy otherwise the rest of the animation is fine.
Ruth Agada
I don't get the end
Joshua Hart
I like the idea, but I'm never sure where i'm supposed to be looking. Sometimes I want to look at the man in front, gesturing, but other times I want to watch the drama unfolding in the back.
Merlyn Moynagh
hilarious acting choices! really told a story. Really watch your spacing and weight, to make sure your arms and poses don't float. and watch that shoulder on the right front character and its clavicle, there no need for it to go that far back and up while the arm is forward. play around with it a bit. Very brave trying to take on three characters at once!
Hannah
Really cool, needs a bit more polish, less snap.