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Relationship Advice

by Kyle

Final Rating: 4.66. Finished #87 out of 211 entries.

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Animator

Kyle

Experience

About 5 years

Time Taken

About 16 hours

Description

A late-night talk show host gives some personal advice to one of his troubled callers.

Comments

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philipp seis

good setting.

David Macatantan

Good animation.

Hand movements are kind of fast. You could let them flow together with arm movements.

Not enough facial animation for this dialogue. Eyebrow don't really move. They could lift at times for a more sincere acting.

Dario

maybe too much movements of the head, he appears a little bit drunk, but great expressions!

Mahesh Waran

good one!
the weight of the mug should fix this

Meng-Syuan Sie

The facial expression is not clear enough to figure out what the character is thinking.

Diane Aarts

only thing I wanna add is make the wall lighter so the mic reads, it's nearly the same tone.