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Better to have loved and lost
by Adam Walton
An elderly man mourns the death of a loved one
Comments
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Chris Bull
Kinda wish the character didn't make such big gestures as at f225ish and the pointing gestures and in general would suit the character better just moving less. Putting hand on table at the end is OK but a bit too slow, also looking like he's going to grab the urn but actually isn't.
philipp seis
what a design ! Amazing.
Philippe Duvin
nice work. But why a camera movement when you don't need it ??
Sophie Bracmard
Please stop this camera move... It has no interest and is just visually annoying. Gestures doesn't seem to sync on the audio.
Merlyn Moynagh
watch those arcs in the spine to the head. really enjoyed the subtle slide down on the chair. keep it up!
kishan Rathod
Needs a lot of improvement !! this is really in Bad mood !!