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Love Lost
by Craig Gullen
3 years as a student in Sydney, no industry experience as of yet
On and off over the month
Dr Jon Harrison giving a lecture on Love, Lost and how to respect yourself to find love again.
Comments
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Mike M.
I like you setting, it establishes the scene, but track in to the speaker when he finalizes the point.
David Macatantan
The keyframes have some potential to make a great performance.
The camera angle irks me a lot. Put your main actor on solid, flat ground please.
Moving the chest isn't enough. Rotate the it forward to give a good looking arc for the spine.
Like I said before great keyframes but you could use some solid break downs.
Jon Coppock
much of the hand movements feel stiff and need work on the arcs, also the hands don't find natural positions and seem to work against eachother.
Michael Condie
Bad mood! Lol
April Slocombe
Bit of a cliched pose on "Bad moods" but the waving on "good mood" was new and different and I like the staging as well.
Billy Kerrigan
The camera is tilted.