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Love Advice
A father giving advice to his daughter about love.
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Jonathan C.
I really liked it. Really smooth and believable movements
David Macatantan
Very fluid animation.
If he is talking to someone, he should look at them once. If he is talking to himself. Find a way to tell the audience.
The hand point hits the note correctly but I don't think it was the right time to use it.
Shark Bait
Nice!
Aaron Rivera
Excellent movement, very fluid. No real complaints.
Mahesh Waran
#respect "the good mood bad mood" expression!
Yuri Marcel Vieira
great job pulling the face down when his hand drop to his chin =D
Merlyn Moynagh
hey! The argus rig! nice! All that movement is a bit distracting for the mood but all in all its a nice piece. keep it up!
Adela Covarrubias
Hola Juan! awsome work! I keep thinking that the last hand movement he does is unecessary, great animation though, good luck!
Kai Huai
Love this shot! I think if the eye direction is clearer and established that there is a character at screen right, it will help setting the scenario up. Maybe he can look screen right at 34, 76. When he is making big gesture with the head, adjust the eye direction to keep the focus! Another nit pick can be the hand gestures, after he straighten up, he can shift his arm away from the knee as they seem similar to the beginning of scene and too uncomfortable for this character. ( there are some weight and drag issue with the hands now too ) Polish the eyes! Adjust the arm poses! And maybe add contrast with the expression at frame 58! It will AMP up this shot even more!@!