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Father
The father is speaking to his child about love.
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philipp seis
good idea !
David BESNIER
in the begining the right hand is making the same movement too many times. just twice would be enough.
Al
Great job. I like what you are going for with this piece. Nice fluid and smooth animation. The only criticisms I have is that it's a bit "pose to pose" at some parts and the lip sync is a bit off. But overall, nice job!
Aaron Rivera
I love the setup here and the resulting action and poses that it yeilds. There's great acting here and the expressions are all solid. I'd say the only real gripe is the lip syncing, which seem a bit off throughout. Great job!
Sophie Bracmard
The way he knocks on the door seems a bit unnatural.