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Father`s opinion.

by sergeyPavlutin

Final Rating: 5.27. Finished #52 out of 211 entries.

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Animator

sergeyPavlutin

Experience

Some time.

Time Taken

Three days.

Description

He wants to tell her... Sorry for her ....

Tags
2D

Comments

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philipp seis

cute !

Jonathan C.

The secondary character looks almost rock solid throughout the shot. Great animation on your primary though.

April Slocombe

Nice and simple drawings and poses but it needs more in-betweens to produce a smoother animation result.

Orlando Lewis D. Bolaton

The girl is a little static

Joshua Hart

You could try moving the top lip/moustache a bit. The bottom lip looks fine, but the top makes it hard to read.