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My Opinion
by Tom Merrison
A friend giving some warm advice over a tea date.
Comments
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Paris Hall
Yeah sure, its not finished, but I can look past what's missing and see the moments that are here. Nice work!
Derek Stewart
This an awesome start! Would have loved to see it taken to spline, and also a push of the camera would be nice. Nice use of the shoulders too. Keep going!
Fabian Rosenkranz
Nice one! Where many others did way too much movement you did the absolute minimum, but it still works.
Nik Ottinger
this one looks like it will be really good! love the subtle head motions at the end
Sahutsawat Seng Khantrum
Nice
André Boulet
Good but go bigger with the mouth!
Merlyn Moynagh
I love the pose and the acting choices but he seems frozen to his spot, theres no body movement at all, try to a little adjusting in his chair, or shifting to move his legs a tad. Sadly, I need to mark this a one because it seems to be in stepped mode so it's not ready for competition, but I hope you keep working on this shot in the future. Its shaping up to be an amazing piece.
Esa Faramarzian
to animate is to entertain. if this shot was good it would be a movie
Elmira Solo
good blocking but not done
Kevin Nguyen
nice animation even tho its still in blocking stage. If u can finish this I m sure can get a better result





