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Rabbit advice
by David BESNIER April Competition Winner
Rabbit with a deep voice.deep feelings.
Animation made with Flash
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philipp seis
very nice. You actually tell 2 stories at the same time. Love live and death of a carrot. The design works amazingly well. Is it 3d ?
Aaron Rivera
This is fantastic! I love the humorous story you managed to tell with this. The style is excellent and the character movement and expression is fluid and sharp. The short cut to the carrot is priceless, especially with the addition of the innocent blink and curious nod. The one minor gripe I have is with the bunny's eyes, which seem too focused to look contemplative, like he spotted a fly on the table and it started moving around. Holding the gaze might've remedied this. But that's the smallest nitpick I could find and this one is certainly in the running this month. I'd be surprised if it didn't make the top 11.
Philippe Duvin
awesome stuff ! love the animation and idea !
Greg Stovell
Loved the character. The grumpy mood contrast with a cute bunny is perfect. I especially like the silence after "good mood, bad mood". Great entry!
Al
Haha, love the expressions on both characters. Great job!
Matt Mck
Nice dialogue to go with audio and good lip sync
Jason Chan P. L.
Love the tapping of the knife before he goes into, "That's the kinda.."
Mahesh Waran
wow! that sir is awesome !!
Sophie Bracmard
Cute character and great animation.
Andre Green
Love it!
Brian Heath
fantastic idea! I love the carrots face and the juice wiggle added a ton to this. The knife jiggle at 289 - 300 was a little weird, not sure what was going on there, but this is one of my favorite pieces so far.
Arpi Harutyunyan
Great Idea !!!
Waddy Devas Wiggle
nice animation,i love it
Elmira Solo
love the idea :)
Zeeshan Karimi
Good work!
I'd leave the plate, knife & fork on table in the first shot as well. But overall enjoyed it! ^_^