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I Owe You One

by Jordan Zambrano

Final Rating: 4.08. Finished #76 out of 175 entries.

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Animator

Jordan Zambrano

Experience

I believe it has been four months since I started animating.

Time Taken

I say about five days of work in total across a one month time span.

Description

The friend giving the other friend a piggy back ride endured walking hundreds of miles just to get his best friend home.

Comments

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Kiefer Paulson

the elbows of the character riding on his back are a little too high

Nicole Brettell

Great facial expressions. Needs something else, like the back ground, but I really like the gestures and the characters.

Casey Howard

The animation is smooth and the lip sync is alright, I really like the how interaction between the two characters was illustrated here.

John Jefferson

Pros:

- Great LipSynching

- Flowing Animation

- Decent Lighting

Cons:

- No Background

- Eyes sometimes go in the back of the head

- Eyes in the beginning (as far as the guy on the back) moves in timing of the motion, like in a fixed direction of looking, if that makes any sense.

Jordan Gross

There's a lot of good voice syncing here, the only thing that is missing is a background.

Jeffrey A Mcrae

I enjoyed the facial expressions as well lip sync, and I liked the animation. The only problem I see is with the lack of torso movement in the second half of the animation from the front character.