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A hell trip

by J. Miguel Gonzalez

Final Rating: 4.43. Finished #60 out of 175 entries.

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Experience

more than 20 years

Time Taken

10 hours

Description

Two guys walking. One is exhausted.

Comments

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Kiefer Paulson

his knees... they bend out sooo far it hurts. also the yellow guy's lip sync could use some attention

Eric Raffle

needed better actions, the camera zoom was off putting to your scene, you need to act out your scene before you started animating

John Jefferson

Pros:

- Nice sense of scale with the quick zoom in with the moutain in the beginning.

- Models look nice.

- Their motions are approriate for the situation.

Cons:

- Lip Synching is bad, or sometimes non-existant.