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travel and survival
by jojo pandit
4.5 yr
1 week 4 days......but rendering taking too long time
two guys survival in ocean and come at beach.
Comments
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Eric Raffle
the scene render is way too bright it off putting, your motion seems fine but not enough facial expression into your characters
Jez
like this 3d
Grant Lamb
The "But uhhh" hold is a bit distractingly long...
John Jefferson
Pros;
- Great idea for the animation
- Models look nice
- Animation flows definetly well, with some exceptions.
- Expressions are animatied ok.
- Lipsynching is alright.
- Great job animating the water as well.
- Ends the scene perfectly.
Cons:
- Sometimes their expressions either jump instantly from one to another, or worse, just hang and make them kind of dead eyed.
roy cobn
the zoom out should be some kind of a surprise? well i don't feel it if it is,,,
Jordan Gross
Good character movement while speaking, and good use of the background info on the bags. The only thing I recommend is adding a background
Martin Strom
I like the idea of being on a raft. The water looks good. But I feel the lip-sync seems pretty much the same on the chubby guy. I think it could have been more emotion on his mouth when he talks.