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A Trip
by Wang Yong
A kind driver helped a traveller who had an accident
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Kiefer Paulson
great poses and timing. my only critique is when the first character is handed the red bag (f 70-85) he doesn't show that it's as heavy as the other guy did (f 30-60). good job otherwise
Nassim Briedj
the throw at the end awesome!
Matt Herbert
Nice timing and natural movements to your characters. Your pacing is very good. Good weight to the suitcase too!
Brady Green
niiiice animation
Dang Duy Quang
Cool!
Jez
despite of basic characters constructions this clip is
extremely well done.
interesting camera cuts, lighting & animation goes without saying.
It shows one does not need fancy characters
to show well done animation.
I would think a sponsor of this site , AnimationMentor.com, could love it
&
might use it as an example of a work well done
I've found only one imperfection when he says "HEY, next time" there is a split of a second cut
which disturbs my eye. It is noticeable but I'm sure easily fixed & got there by an editing mistake
Simple but well done
could be the winner.
Aram Lakhotia
I like the acting.
Justin Jones
Good animation, but I suggest that you don't show the characters clipping in/out of frame during each scene change.
Siddhartha Ahearne
Nice work, like the natural feel of it all.
Couple of things that I find could improved it,
The twinning on the arms between frames 18-25, a slight offset to each other would have been nice.
Between frames 125 and 192, he does 2 gestures with the right hand and one with the left hand, I think a head gesture instead of the left hand would have been more natural.
Good Job, congrats!
Alec Durant
this is really nice!