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It's Been Hell

by Bethany Schreiber

Final Rating: 4.19. Finished #73 out of 175 entries.

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Experience

Recently Graduated

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Two men stuck in a box.

Unpolished, but time ran out!

Comments

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Eric Raffle

nice idea but your motion is off and it doesn't look like they are speaking ,also your faces needed more facial expressions

Linda Rizo

It lacks credibility

roy cobn

where are they?

John Jefferson

Pros:

- Very well done lighting to indicate they are in a box.

- Good Lipsynching.

- Animation is ok, albeit unnatural.

Cons:

- Animation feels unnatural, especially with the guy on the left that's supposed to be implied to sleep on the dude, when it looks like he just dropped on the dude on purpose to be a meanie.

- Expressions feel forced.

- Head Motions look really bad, like they're bobble heads.