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TIME TRAVELER
Description
This video is about 2 friends who have come back after time travelling
Comments
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Eric Raffle
your scene needs more realism to the actions and you need to work on getting better speech movement
Serg
very static poses and you need some more work on timing
e.g. the spine of the green guy doesn't moves and only his arms do
Justin Jones
Some animation felt a little stiff, but the timing felt very off when the ball dropped. It leaves me asking "what is that ball, and why did it fall?"
Casey Howard
It's not bad, but it's not amazing either, the character's are a bit static. The lip sync is okay, but I do love the scene that you set up here.