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Bobby's solid advice

by Savinien B. Ness

Final Rating: 5.74. Finished #34 out of 290 entries.

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Animator

Savinien B. Ness

Experience

2 Years

Time Taken

Three weeks

Description

A young cop is giving some solid advice to his veteran teammate.

Comments

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Isadora Morales Chaves

The expressions are good. You should work on the timing.

Michael McKnight

I can see the story that developing out of this animation. Good animation overall, only thing I'll say is that lip syncing could use a little more work.

John Leland

that look at the end was really well done

Rachel Bossert

You have some pretty good poses. My main suggestion though would be to have some sharper movements rather than just ease in and ease out.

Imon Branch

The main topic shows and the movement was very good.

William Harrison

Work a bit more on the mouth movements and overall lip sync. The body animation was very nice.