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Shoulda Played Dead
by Sam
Description
Someone explains to friend how he shoulda played dead.
Comments
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David Budgen
Lip Syncing is very unconvincing.
Shaun Bartoo
Your camera move at the start is unnecessary. It feels like you just didn't want to animate the first several seconds of dialogue. Really lacking animation fundamentals here. Needs a lot of work.
Fernando Incetta
Facial animation is very basic. Also, try to shift the weight a little bit. Standing that still, with the torso straight, is very unnatural and unappealing.
Imon Branch
too soon to start the scene