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In Trouble

by Andy

Final Rating: 2.87. Finished #233 out of 290 entries.

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Animator

Andy

Experience

A few months overall - using this as practice to move into computer animation after university

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

Man hiding from the police in a bathroom reflecting on what just went wrong.

Comments

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Isadora Morales Chaves

I'd suggest not moving only the head. Subtle movements are important.

Erich

we're not statues when we talk, move around some more! The lip sync was good though

Frank Geadah

Just head movement...and not good movement at that.

Rachel Col

The lip syncing is good, but it'd be cool to see more body movements.

Michael McKnight

No real body movement to speak of, only the head moving. Lip sync is decent otherwise.

Imon Branch

need to work on the body movement some more. but it is good

Shaun Bartoo

You're animating like your character is a bobble head! Even in a closeup, you need root and shoulder movement. So stiff!