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GAME OVER. Should play dead!!
A kid was playing a shooter game, he died, and he fell to the ground (in real life, because of the shock).
Then, a guy is telling the other kid what he should have done to avoid the death.
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Jarl
Your acting choices and poses have potential. It seems like you have a good feeling of weight on his first step (ending around frame 182). Some of the timing of his acting seems a little out of sync with the audio. Your eye directions (for example frame 252) seems a little crooked, and the last step he makes feels like it is missing the nice feeling of weight you had on the first step. That second step wouldn't call for the same amount of weight as the first, just more feeling of gravity having an affect on his body position than what you have here.
Diane Aarts
nice job matching the audio :)
Imon Branch
pretty good with topic but why that background.