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Road Kill

by Eric Raffle

Final Rating: 4.45. Finished #98 out of 290 entries.

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Animator

Eric Raffle

Experience

not much

Time Taken

2 Weeks

Description

two spiders destined to be killed

Comments

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Fernando Incetta

With a character that is 80% face, you should take special care with facial animations. Here, you have the same face all the time. I know it must be a rig limitation but it really hurts your piece.

Shaun Bartoo

The flips in the spider's body are too fast

Francisco J Ramirez

i like that walk ..

Dominic Rayner

I like this because you still feel he is talking when he walks around, and you can get away without perfect lipsynch with this text anyway. It is one of the few here that has original animation to the dialogue, even the other well animated entrants tend to use annoying mechanical cliché gestures which do not inspire.. Although the facial animation is limited, and it's too dark to see parts, well done.

Amin Bahari

pretty bold to pick a character with as many legs to animate.

Imon Branch

that was good