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Playdead
A mouse's killed ! So another mouse is talking about it's experienc how not to be killed by them.
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Michael Kasiurak
I like the animation, especially the blur motions you just need to match up the words a bit more but over all good job.
Michael McKnight
There's definitely a lot of effort put into this. The only real complaint I have is the lack of frames. It makes it look choppy and doesn't allow the lip sync to be smooth enough.
Brianna
This is honestly well animated, but you did not handle the swipe frames properly. The point of them is that you feel swipes, not see them. If you had kept the swipe frames to be on 1 frame instead of 3-4, this would have been very nice
Jessica "Jess" Jerome
lip sync could use more work
Dominic Rayner
The swift movement lines distract. It looks like the side of his body is falling apart. Consider less hold on those. Lips and expressions seem very limited, mistimed. Well done though, drawing this dialogue is not easy.
Francisco J Ramirez
motion blur makes it seem as though the character is turning into liquid. frame 305 would be a great place to use motion blur.
Imon Branch
that is very cute