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Play Dead
by Terry Bagby
Marshall got beat up, and Dante keeps hitting his (Marshall's) bad arm while doling out a life lesson. Sheesh.
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Fernando Incetta
Very good overall. I think the biggest issue is with hand animations. They look stiff and unapealling. Try to push them further next time.
Shaun Bartoo
Your crutch walk cycle is awesome. Theres something funny in the left characters neck motions. It translates pretty dramatically independent of the rest of his body at times, which looks unnatural. You could probably tone down the x translation in the left character's hips too.
Joel Murphy
the weight placement on the crutch is a little off. video reference could have prevented that issue. You have some good animation instincts, but this detail seems to have gotten overlooked.
Imon Branch
that was good