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A Grave Decision
A man wants to help a grieving widow, but instead discovers he's not very good at it.
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Geoff Simmonds
Nice idea and setup. Needs more holds and definition on poses which need to be more "struck". Also a bit difficult to read character animation because of lighting.
John
Ha! Love the idea!
Francisco J Ramirez
nice setting. maybe a tad more exaggeration while delivering dialogue.
Craig Joseph Massa
The movements seem a bit floaty. Work on your timing a bit. Maybe show some anticipation in his movements. He just goes from pose to pose which is alright, but seems a bit slow. Overlapping and secondary actions might fix this? Also the lip sync is alright, but could use a few touch ups.
Michael Kristiansen
A shame with his hand going through her shoulder - it stole away my attention. But the rest looks good.
Imon Branch
okay it is good