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Playing dead
Description
A man is talking about how to stay alive
Comments
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Erich
Drop the shoulders and film yourself for reference so you can use that as timing!
Fernando Incetta
There's not much happening here. Work more on your poses.
Kait M.
The arms a bit stiff, you don't have to be super exaggerated, but a bit more acting in the arms.
Michael McKnight
Lip syncing is good, but the body is way too stiff looking! Looks like he's being held up by sticks.
Imon Branch
the entire body movement need a little work.