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Tiki Bar Advice
by Jarl
VFX rigger (no professional work experience as an animator)
evenings and weekends
Sage advice from the guy who's seen it all!
Comments
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Geoff Simmonds
Nice start but feels a little unfinished. Lipsynch drops out a bit from time to time.
Hacho
cute style!
John
Pretty good, but you forgot to make him blink :)
Otávio Neres
Maybe the anticipation before the "we're going to kill you" part was a bit too long? I like some subtle moves, how about trying to push the poses even further? Also, take a look at moving holds, it will be golden for you!
Keep up!
Nick Barbour
Mouth doesn't match up to certain parts, seems a little laggy
Fernando Incetta
Good use of secondary action.
Avinash Kharat
good work ! just check out the eyes because its floating.eyes are going withe in the end part
Imon Branch
cleaver scene