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Play Dead
by Carlos
used maya 2016
Comments
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Serg
I think there is too much camera movements. Try choosing like two or max 3 fixed camera angles instead of moving it all the time
Isadora Morales Chaves
You should really avoid pointless camera moves. It doesn't add anything to the narrative and it takes away from the animation.
Frank Geadah
Keep the camera stationary.
Kait M.
Since your animation is fairly dynamic, I would be wary of using too many camera moves.
Foster Eber
There are a lot of camera movements, I would try to tone it down to just a few
Sharkhead
Not ready...
Imon Branch
camera action need a little work and its a little fuzzy.
Deanna Martin
The chose to have the camera movie so much confuses me, I get the felling of someone who shouldn't be there filming a crime scene, with their smart phone.