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Deadly treasure

by Jason Wellings

Final Rating: 6.19. Finished #21 out of 290 entries.

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Animator

Jason Wellings

Experience

4 yrs

Time Taken

25hrs

Description

A man kills another man for his treasure and then tells him what he would have done differently.

Comments

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Michael Kasiurak

Good body movements!

Fernando Incetta

Great acting.

Kevin

I think the quality and smoothness of your animation is great. I also really think you made some good acting/posing choices up through about frame 196, especially at the beginning where the character is looking at the coin, gestures with it, then stands up and puts it in his pocket, that's some really nice stuff. After frame 196 I think the acting/poses could be stronger with other types of poses. I also thought it was great how you have the character quickly move back and forth as he plays the different parts like in classic 2D stuff such as Looney Toons.

Joaquin Casas

love it

Imon Branch

the voice is too low but the scene is good.