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soldier soul....

by Dipankar Chakrabarti

Final Rating: 6.74. Finished #13 out of 290 entries.

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Experience

some

Time Taken

3 to 4 days after work

Description

courtesy animschool malcom rig

Comments

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sandeepkumargoje

good one

Serg

funny idea :) well done ! top 10 :)

Michael Yochim

Really cool concept, very clever!

Fernando Incetta

Great job! Excellent facial animations. Congratulations.

Isadora Morales Chaves

It's nice. I just think sometimes the actions are a bit over the top. Subtle movements are good too.

Otávio Neres

The movement is good but the storytelling is a bit off? I don't get why the protagonist "dies" at the ending?

Jessica "Jess" Jerome

interestiing

Joel Murphy

Love the concept! Great animation work as well!
Might be a nice moment if you allowed the guy talking to realize it's his own body. Maybe show a little fear, then have him look at his hands as he fades away/flies up.

Davit Martirosyan

Cool! Top 5

Joaquin Casas

Awesome! But this end? xD

Lukasz Wenc

1st place for me:D

Zeeshan Karimi

Keep up the great work! All the best!

Avinash Kharat

when he says "always" there is a jerk in his left hand. add cushion in his hands . when he point out gun to dead character can you improve the grip of left hand. but over all i like his acting , nice animation .

Imon Branch

intro too long, and why did the main character disapper at the end?