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Small time crook low-down
A wanna-be gangster trying to impress nervously.
Comments
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Rachel Wach
I needed more emotion from the character. Didn't connect at all.
Paul Von
poses are weak
John
I think you need to exaggerate the movements a little more. It's kinda like he is being restrained by something.
Michael Kristiansen
Too static for me compared to the soundclip. Does'nt seem to fit together imo.
But the setup and animation is not bad.
Michael McKnight
Lip sync and general animation is decent, and I quite like the background used here. Could definitely be more emotive in the body movements.
Nick Barbour
The character doesn't fit the audio, in terms of emotion and and body language.
Benjamin Arzt
I expected this character to be more energetic with more body acting, but I gave you a 10 because would work quite well as a subtle "talking head" documentary shot :)
Connor Leuck
Needs more poses and emotion. There is only one time he blinks.
Imon Branch
a little more body movement.