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bionics gone wrong

by Cento Bite

Final Rating: 1.93. Finished #278 out of 290 entries.

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Animator

Cento Bite

Experience

Going for acociates degree.

Time Taken

a good 14 days of character modeling and rigging

Description

A Government laboratory clones a dinosaur and its the coworkers job to stop it.

Comments

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John

wut. I have no idea what just happened.

Fernando Incetta

I'm sorry but you can't even tell what's happening. Think about staging first of all.

Nicholas Clubb

When the dialog actually starts, the camera is too far out for me to make out if his lip movements are correct, and a majority of the time the guard does not really move at all, and when he does, the movements look somewhat robotic.

Mark Mingo

Too dark, and the scene situation doesn't make sense.

Sharkhead

What is this?

Rodrigo Torres

It's very small! I can hardly see what's happening

William Harrison

The shot is kind of confusing, I'm not really understanding what's going on here.

Imon Branch

why the camera moving too much and the intro was questionable?