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Ok, drop dead
Description
Someone teach you how should played dead when somebody want to kill you
Comments
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Isadora Morales Chaves
It's good but, why is the camera moving? It takes away from the animation
Erich
Drop the shoulder and have them move up and down with the actions.
Dominic Rayner
Not bad but some jarring movements back and forth
Jim P
I like the camera motion.
Rachel Bossert
I would suggest keeping the camera in one place or doing a slow pan/zoom in rather than moving the camera in every direction he moves. It gets a little dizzying.
Imon Branch
try to make the camera steady but background is very good.
Moby
Camera is a little too energetic.
Good effort.