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cleanup

by Ryan Woods

Final Rating: 4.22. Finished #99 out of 218 entries.

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Animator

Ryan Woods

Experience

bachelors degree

Time Taken

40 hours

Description

quick animation did in my spare time. still figuring out some of the timing /playback difference between maya and end result.

Comments

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Christopher Winn

love the poses but it needs some ease in and outs

David BESNIER

It's a little bit jerky : the acting should continue even if the character doesn't talk.

Nathaniel Vaughan

Who's interrogating him? I'd like to know.

Kyle Newton

The motion for "imprison them" is really unique and fitting. It would be nice if you could improve your framing though.

Ben Hall

This is almost there but the rhythm of the animation feels too predictable like you can see every stop and starting point of your animation where some overlapping action and changing up the timing so it's less predictable could help greatly

Aaron McGriff

Check your aspect ratio. 16:9 works best.