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Military test

by Gero M

Final Rating: 6.59. Finished #14 out of 218 entries.

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Animator

Gero M

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

1 week

Description

A guy tries to get involved in the army. He takes a test but ...

Comments

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Ivan Mendoza

Work on the "in prison" lip sync bit. Nice stuff.

Michaela Dawn

Exaggerate a bit more.

Richard Adams

Decent overall. Mostly staging problems.

Staging in the first 337 frames is completely unnecessary and detracts from this entry. Frames 937 onward also unnecessary. I liked the 2 guys clapping him. Facial expressiveness and body language is decent.

Worawut Wichakmetee

Good Jobs

Jean Bultingaire

nice I like the head swing

Nathaniel Vaughan

Lip sync is spot on and setup works well, though it goes without saying the lack of texture makes it irritable to watch.

Bri Greene

LOL, love it!

Matthew Gilligan

need to work on lip sync a bit more but the body gestures are fine

Ben Hall

The animation is pretty fluid there are some points where I can't read his emotions or expressions and the animation speed up at one point toward the end but it's good overall

Jon Gama

Cants understand why his variety of expressions.