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Easter trouble
Well, SOMEONE had to take care of the bunnies!
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Pamela Rivera
hahha this is a nice concept. but I think you should work more on the expression of his face when he asks "this are prisoners?"
Kyle Newton
interesting interpretation of the dialogue. I'd like to see more attention on the character animation though.
Imani Jay
Your cuts to different shots is a bit off. Instead of starting off with showing the face of the character. A better alt. could have been to show the cats first - then pan up or do a quick zip up to the main characters face looking around nervously. And the next cut of the cats again made me think that the cats were the one speaking in that robotic voice and not the speaker. But the ending was funny and I liked how you executed it!
Ben Hall
could use more movement and poses the zooming out and cutting away from the character really rob this from having more opportunities for animation