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Prisoners go to prison

by Ira Kondratyuk

Final Rating: 3.59. Finished #152 out of 218 entries.

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Animator

Ira Kondratyuk

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

Situation on a spaceship somewhere in the distant galaxy. Prison guard stops the man accompanying prisoners to the space prison.

Comments

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Janice Lee Carter

No sound

Jon Bryson

No sound?

Nicholas Rodriguez

Can't hear the audio clip!

Holden Van Houten

Ya ain't got no sound, but the animation is pretty decent.

John McSwiggin

There is no sound

Zachary Checkeye

Yo the audio didn't make it in bro

Michaela Dawn

Very smooth but felt almost too floaty. Try adding more hold frames.

Richard Adams

No audio? Took me a while to realize the flour sacks were prisoners. Certainly a unique idea. :)

Daniel Sang Lee

Am I buggin out or is there no sound...?

Kristen P.

Ok, you're missing your audio...
Because I know the audio, I know your lip sink could improve a lot; I'm not critiquing your body-language animation (it's good), but try an focus a bit more on the mouth (and test play before you upload).

Ron

Sound is missing but animation is solid.

Nathaniel Vaughan

So, where's the audio?

Anise Akiko Ambuehl

Good animation but audio is missing

Sharkhead

no sound

Brian W.

So much of this is so good, but the upper torsos of both characters wave about like seaweed in oscillating ocean currents. The rest of the movements are otherwise natural looking with good arcs, so nice work otherwise.

Todd Christiansen

no audio on this one?

amol

can't be able to hear sound, I think you have some issue with upload

William Barry Eggington

Looks good but I can't hear the audio.

Nikki Christie

Audio broken? :(

Kyle Newton

Sound aside, your motions are a bit too gradual. Snap a bit more from one pose to another.

Darius O'Neill

Really good animation but you forgot the sound so it's hard to tell if the lip sync matches up.

Ben Hall

It;s pretty good the movements can be a little to bendy sometimes but are done nicley just remember to get the audio in next time

Aaron McGriff

Sound isnt working for me