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Akward Lie
by Don Dixon
Description
Team of space cowboys, trying to escape in typical star wars fashion, Hiding weapons to try and make a clean getaway using their adorable comic relief sidekick to talk a super droid in letting them move along.
Comments
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Elizabeth Dik
In the first line of the dialogue it doesn't look like anything in speaking, but other than that is good
Brian W.
Excellent acting. Very nice work.
Ben Hall
I really love how you handled the hovering of this creature and his poses and expressions really sell the situation





