« Back to April 2017 Competition
Racismo
Description
Trata de un policia que mete a la carcel a un joven por su color
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Richard Adams
Far too dark to see well.
Worawut Wichakmetee
Good jobs but it's not smooth
Kyle Newton
motions don't have much of a purpose or naturalness. Convince the viewer they're actually looking at a human. Improve the lighting too, if not in your 3D program, it could easily be done in post processing with Premiere or After Effects.
Nathaniel Vaughan
Didn't feel much like a first person's perspective.
Michael Smith
A little dark but loved the detail.
Ben Hall
Need 12 principles of animation here