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Los prisioneros
A un hombre nervioso le preguntan por los prisioneros.
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Imani Jay
I like how the audience is inside the security camera lens in this shot - but I would say if you're going to distort the main character ; then be aware of your background characters too because they look normally proportionate in comparision
Kyle Newton
I'm guessing you were trying to go for a security camera viewpoint, but I don't think the warped lens is helping. It's more of a crutch to make the actions look more interesting, but the focus should really be on making really good acting where he has varied key poses.
Ben Hall
Need 12 principles of animation here
Aaron McGriff
Camera is confusing and distracting.