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Not this again...
2 years, current student
overall 1 month, actual time animating 7 days
Nick is a hotshot detective who sees lots of action and always walks in the bad guys personally. Doug on the other hand is a desk cop/Jail guard who doesn't get much action besides messing with Nick when he brings more bad guys in.
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Michaela Dawn
Idea is great. The cop's expressions in the beginning are fantastic, but it feels like you gave up half way through.
Christopher Winn
First off, I wanna thank my Lord Jesus Christ for helping me get this uploaded in time. I couldn't have done it without His help. Thank you to everyone who voted (fairly of course... haha) and to those who commented as well. I will be reading them and taking your critiques into consideration. This was my first 11 sec Club competition and I had a blast animating. There are a ton of things in here that I would have liked to fix. However, time was of the essence and deadlines hindered me from doing so. All in all this was great practice. Thanks again!!! :)
Kyle Newton
It looks like you might be capable of pulling off more interesting character acting. It's kind of a shame you took a bored approach with the main guy since it doesn't make the shot interesting, especially from a distance. You could also have included the other prisoner guys in the shot for more variety.
Phuc Truong
nice models for context. Solid animation. I would pull the camera closer to the lipsync models so that the audience can see them better and it allow for better staging.
Ben Hall
the motions and poses are strong in the begining but peter out a little toward the end becoming unnaturally slow