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Sharky Pack & Prisoners
I am doing my MA in 3D Animation since October 2016.
It took me 4 days in total.
Animation made for my Master's assignment.
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Elizabeth Dik
I'm not sure if this was your intention or not, but the arm movements are very floaty and feel like they have little to no weight to them
Imani Jay
Creative concept but I would have liked to have seen more movement. You have it in the jelly fish but what about the establishing shot? Why not have the orange fish walk closer to the shark first before speaking? From the distance they're at- I feel like the fish would have to yell in order to be heard by the shark.
Jean Bultingaire
There is no great pose, no spacing, too much arm moving.
Nathaniel Vaughan
I'd like to know what was actually happening.
Ben Hall
It's a little floaty but the characters are underwater so you get away with it a little but I feel like the movement still isn't realistic enough even under these circumstances and would require research as to how things move underwater. Some of the poses could be stronger and the lip sync doesn't match
Howard Cameron
very floaty