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Flying The Coop

by Peter F. Holcomb

Final Rating: 3.74. Finished #138 out of 218 entries.

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Animator

Peter F. Holcomb

Experience

2 years a student

Time Taken

One week

Description

This escape has hit a snag.

Comments

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Michaela Dawn

Needs to be smoother. Still very jerky. Try smoothing out keyframes in the graph editor. Emotions should not transition from a-b, but more like a-b-c.

David BESNIER

Don't just move the head, it's not natural

Kyle Newton

The characters are moving stiffly, but there's something weirdly charming about their expressions.

Ben Hall

Need 12 principles of animation here