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prisoners I suppose...
the kind of prisoners in this video are not what they are supposed to...
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Pamela Rivera
work more on the animation curves, it feels too linear.
Michaela Dawn
Don't move the camera so much. It takes away from the animation. Just have it jumpcut from still shot to still shot.
David BESNIER
The camera is moving too much
Javid Fathi
Good work with your character animation, I like the idea of two robots sharing the conflict. Because your characters don't have mouths), make sure that you make the secondary and body action that much clearer [head nods and antenna movement might show the character's focus/thoughts rather than their word phrasing]. Marvin the Martian is a perfect example of this, if you need one. Good work overall. :)
Ben Hall
Need 12 principles of animation here