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Give me the password 4 the WIFI
by Mattia SERNA
Description
Hello this is my first competition,Hope you enjoy it!
A man falls in an ambush planned by his nemesis.
Comments
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Alex Sanderson
Pretty good, for me the only major improvement would be to not have the 2nd characters mouth opening so wide
Zach Savaglio
The arm movements on the second character a bit quick. Maybe more frames in between?
Lina Zhutautaite
cool, I like the idea, camera view, just a bit lack of body mechanic and polishing