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Jose Rojas - COLOMBIA
by Jose Rojas
Maya + Arnold
Comments
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Zach Savaglio
The guidelines say no sound added to the original recording. The animation itself is choppy. I'd work on that.
padel
i think the cam movement is too much..
Sam
Camera work is choppy, and so is some of the animation. Also the rest of the skeleton disappears, and you have some issues with the fox's mouth...
Vincent Marcheselli
the camera is jumpy and the lip sync is off a bit. Has potential.
Jordan Smith
What. Is. Happening.
Tom Islava
the audio sync is way off
Jessica Cain
Woah! Cool models, but you've got too much going on. Focus on the scene, what actions actually make sense and don't detract from the focus? (Secondary Action), You're framing is not great either. It's hard to tell what's going on in the scene. It's a good idea to utilize the camera, but the camera is moving too much and also detracts from the animation.